The expression on his face is absolutely priceless, and you did great job with the shading and his clothing.
Nitpicks:
His back foot looks like it's angled away from the camera, whereas his front foot appears to be angled toward it. It's possible that the shadow being cast on it by the cloak is the issue -- at the moment, the cloak looks very close to his foot, given where the shadow from it falls on his leg. That foot should be far away from that side of the cloak.
The hand and arm holding the money bag are positioned awkwardly. The hand seems like it's tilted a bit funny (the thumb should be even with the top of the hand), and the arm looks like it's being held a little too far up.
His neck should be shadowed more dramatically.
Very good overall. This pose is a lot more dynamic than your other ones, and it works well. He looks sneaky and full of himself. :)
Very meta, using a contest entry in another contest entry for the same contest. :)
@Anonmyous:
He released it into the public domain. You don't have to ask permission (although a credit and a link are always nice as a courtesy). :)
I'm already using views. Why?
Can't replicate this issue. Anyone else?
Sorry, I need to make a clarification.
At minimum, since we need to maintain the quality of the art archive, any submissions need to be useful for a game. :)
Very nice work. HTML5 rules. :)
I've uploaded a current windows build with the new changes. See the beginning of the thread for what is done so far.
http://opengameart.org/content/orange-engine-pre-alpha-for-windows
Ugh, that's no fun. Welcome back. :)
Let me know when the new version is ready and I'll add it into the game.
O.o
How did you do that? Seriously in an SVG editor from the start, or did you render it in 3D and use that as a base?
Either way, excellent work!
Excellent!
The expression on his face is absolutely priceless, and you did great job with the shading and his clothing.
Nitpicks:
Very good overall. This pose is a lot more dynamic than your other ones, and it works well. He looks sneaky and full of himself. :)
Peace,
Bart
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