I'm not too sure what a Japanese eyepatch is. But I will do one of the characters, Violet, I think, then you can see what you think, and then we can go from there.
OK then, let's start with one character for now and see if it's something you can really use first ^^
Tbh I hadn't really committed to making NPC's and stuff also yet, and it's not that I don't want to, but I need to get the style on point first, and we should also clarify a bit about your game and what you expect from me as part of the team first, hopefully you understand ^^
Interesting game you got, right now it seems like a more primitive version of Factorio, and while it's a little bit confusing at first (like for example knowing that you have to stand still to craft stuff) it was quite fun to go around hunting rats for a couple of days :)
The plant idea seems interesting and unique to me, as (let's face it) most games in this genre don't feature a very realistic agricultural system. I think it's a good idea to give the player a little taste of the hardships and challenges invoved in actual farming, rather than just things popping out of the ground magically (my own game is guilty of this, even)
It's too bad that your main character looks so blurry though. It really detracts from the look of the game, which looks ok otherwise. Some sound effects would also help making the game better I think, I don't really think music is too necessary for a game like this, but ambient sounds like the rustling of leaves and the wind would provide a nice touch ^^
Sadly I don't think I can help much with your drawing, plants is one of my weakest points next to vehicles and buildings :P
But hopefully this little bit of feedback still proves marginally useful or helpful to you! Best of luck!
Yes, this is really good. Looks like it could've come authentically out of any arcade game.
Hippo-men!
They're so cute!
What Deviant Artists? I know a fair few.
Pretty much every anime does the pale white thing, so there's no need for you to feel especially bad about it I would say. If even at all
The Japanese ones are obviously supposed to be Japanese I guess, in anime that equals to pale white as you likely know ^^
Also: what are the characters skin colors? Since they are American they could be either black or white.
Reminds me of the power rangers... :D
I'm not too sure what a Japanese eyepatch is. But I will do one of the characters, Violet, I think, then you can see what you think, and then we can go from there.
Well you're the only one who decides how quickly you want to answer. Just take as much time as you want.
OK then, let's start with one character for now and see if it's something you can really use first ^^
Tbh I hadn't really committed to making NPC's and stuff also yet, and it's not that I don't want to, but I need to get the style on point first, and we should also clarify a bit about your game and what you expect from me as part of the team first, hopefully you understand ^^
Interesting game you got, right now it seems like a more primitive version of Factorio, and while it's a little bit confusing at first (like for example knowing that you have to stand still to craft stuff) it was quite fun to go around hunting rats for a couple of days :)
The plant idea seems interesting and unique to me, as (let's face it) most games in this genre don't feature a very realistic agricultural system. I think it's a good idea to give the player a little taste of the hardships and challenges invoved in actual farming, rather than just things popping out of the ground magically (my own game is guilty of this, even)
It's too bad that your main character looks so blurry though. It really detracts from the look of the game, which looks ok otherwise. Some sound effects would also help making the game better I think, I don't really think music is too necessary for a game like this, but ambient sounds like the rustling of leaves and the wind would provide a nice touch ^^
Sadly I don't think I can help much with your drawing, plants is one of my weakest points next to vehicles and buildings :P
But hopefully this little bit of feedback still proves marginally useful or helpful to you! Best of luck!
~Kir
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