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Harpy

Author: 
Firesrest
Friday, January 22, 2021 - 15:13
Art Type: 
3D Art
Tags: 
Flying Monster
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CC-BY 4.0
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A rigged harpy

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harpy.7z harpy.7z 242.2 Kb [50 download(s)]
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Danimal
joined 14 years 9 months ago
01/23/2021 - 06:46

Hi Firesrest, this will be hard to use for anyone so i will tell you some points to improve. I can see that you are starting so take this as future Todo as you learn.

-Its too high poly, you can do better with far less, you most likely used an effect to smooth surface, it has the fault of messing the whole figure and proportions.
-The overall figure is pretty bad, no butt and breasts bigger than the head?, either go petite or thicc for consistency.
-The wings are not shaped as wings at all, try to always reference real models when making something, its amazing how a few joints make everything look much better. The feets could use a few more claws each, look at chicken feet, same for lower legs.
-UV unwrapping and texturing, its half the job but without those chance to someone using your models is close to zero.

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Firesrest
joined 4 years 3 months ago
01/24/2021 - 05:28

First point is fair, it is several models joined together.

Second point the breasts are actually muscle joined to a bone ridge.

Yes, they were taken from a model that is designed to be more alien.

The uv wrapping works if each material is done separately. Otherwise, yes it is a mess.

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