Hey! Since you said you want some feedback, I might as well. :d

I feel like the instruments are all very similar: they're all saw synths, and they're all doing different melodies, so the instruments end up merging into one sound that's kinda messy.

Another thing (might just be personal preference) is that the drums don't feel very satisfying. The entire song sounds like a buildup, so I keep expecting it to drop and be like *kick snare kick snare* but it doesn't.

The intro with just the muffled synth though sounds very cool! Think this could become really good.