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Bart's art practice

bart
Friday, September 2, 2011 - 22:06
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So Ceninan and I agreed the other day that we were going to do some back and forth art practice and critique, so here's something I drew in 30 minutes or so:

 

The above image is based on this photo by Marcus Ranum.  Bearing in mind that it's just a quick sketch, feel free to comment.

Bart

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manwesulimo2004
joined 14 years 2 months ago
Saturday, September 3, 2011 - 13:53
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Looks really good already. I think the perspective on the legs is a bit off though.

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nubux
joined 14 years 8 months ago
Saturday, September 3, 2011 - 16:28

You could rotate (anticlockwise) the pelvis in my opinion. Otherwise she seems to have one leg shorter than the other.

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ceninan
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Thursday, September 8, 2011 - 07:51
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How sneaky of you not telling me you posted this :).

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Charlie
joined 15 years 10 months ago
Thursday, September 8, 2011 - 09:33

Bigger butt cheeks are needed.  (Um, is that a bit blunt?)

http://forum.freegamedev.net/

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bart
joined 13 years 12 months ago
Thursday, September 8, 2011 - 17:49
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Okay, once more with feeling. :)

I tried to take into account all the C&C I've gotten on this.  In particularl, I've tried to make her pose a bit more dynamic, because it's pretty flat in the other.  Note that pose and proportions are intended to be a bit exaggerated, but are intended to look correct in that context.  Hover over the image to see the whole thing.

 

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nubux
joined 14 years 8 months ago
Thursday, September 8, 2011 - 19:48

Much better but there is something wrong in her face, i think the nose is too low or too long.

Maybe you should move a bit the nose and eye to the right so they are aligned with the mouth.

The face on the first draw was better I think (though the eye is better on the second ^^)

 

last thing: the neck have to be in the middle of the trunk.

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bart
joined 13 years 12 months ago
Tuesday, September 13, 2011 - 20:57
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Here's another.

Reference: http://mjranum-stock.deviantart.com/art/This-Will-Only-Hurt-a-Lot-10-185...

I'm not totally satisfied with it, but the whole point of this exercise is to get critiques and opinions, so bring it on. :)

Bart

 

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bart
joined 13 years 12 months ago
Saturday, September 17, 2011 - 18:43
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And another.

Pose ref:  http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=&section=&q=tough+girl+cosplay#/d41f9iq

 

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bart
joined 13 years 12 months ago
Sunday, September 25, 2011 - 18:50
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I've been trying unsuccessfully to exaggerate the poses up until now.  I think this time I may have actually succedded.

Critiques?

Ref: http://i.imgur.com/Fmdiz.jpg

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bart
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Monday, September 26, 2011 - 10:05
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Here's another, with a somewhat tougher pose.

Ref: http://i.imgur.com/Vhrha.jpg

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undesired
joined 14 years 4 months ago
Wednesday, October 5, 2011 - 04:51

My best advice right now is to learn from life drawing books - you've got anime heads down sort of right, save for the eye positions not offset 'inside' enough but the anatomy in general is a bit blank. The biggest problem seems to be in the waist area IMO

 

 

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bart
joined 13 years 12 months ago
Monday, October 17, 2011 - 14:36
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Ugh.  I'm not doing that well today.  This is the best I could come up with after several false starts.  I'm trying to work on the midsection.

Ref: http://markdaughn.deviantart.com/gallery/?catpath=/&offset=120#/d2e1kwr (NUDITY)

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bart
joined 13 years 12 months ago
Monday, October 24, 2011 - 10:08
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On paper this time.  1, 2, and 3 are the best, the rest are mostly junk.

 

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nubux
joined 14 years 8 months ago
Monday, October 24, 2011 - 12:31

I think you make some progress.

You should do some warm-up before drawing (5/10 minutes) : drawing staight lines, circles, curves, hatches,  drawing with left hand, if possible on large sheets. It's very important if you want to have  accurate lines.

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bart
joined 13 years 12 months ago
Monday, October 24, 2011 - 15:30
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Here I'm experimenting with the idea of drawing the skull as a sphere and the face as kind of an oval-shaped mask.

 

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bart
joined 13 years 12 months ago
Tuesday, October 25, 2011 - 13:57
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Taking the mask idea a bit further.  The top drawing is kind of crappy, but the bottom one isn't too bad.

Unfortunately, in the case of the bottom one, I still needed to make adjustments to the shape of the chin, but I left the guidelines in to hopefully give me a better concept of the 3d shape of the "mask".

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bart
joined 13 years 12 months ago
Tuesday, October 25, 2011 - 14:43
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This one isn't all that great -- I fixed the eye in gimp, but at least this time I didn't have to redraw the chin after I drew the face, so that's something.

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bart
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Tuesday, October 25, 2011 - 16:02
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I think these are better.

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undesired
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Tuesday, October 25, 2011 - 16:17

I agree those are better

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Redshrike
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Thursday, October 27, 2011 - 08:38
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Careful on the second image in your last post.  Look at where the neck connects with the head.  Still, I think you're moving in a good trajectory here and the drawings are definitely improving.

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bart
joined 13 years 12 months ago
Thursday, October 27, 2011 - 10:17
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Yeah, I realized that after I posted it.  The spine is toward the back of the skull, so the neck should have been further back.  That's what I get for just drawing it without thinking about it. :)

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